The Presence of My Soul !

Posted September 20, 2020 from Bangladesh
The Presence of My Soul
The Presence of My Soul : This poem is dedicated to the enlightened souls (Photo : When I was 21 ) (1/1)

"The Presence of My Soul" ( Written in 2000 ) By Husna Murad

The sound of my soul vibrates in the sky and air,

The warmth of my heart becomes foamy in the waves of ocean,

The grief of my own universe rains from dark clouds to the earth.

Hear lending your ears to the ground,

I am sleeping here.

Open your eyes,

I am alive in the billion of stars in the sky,

I am alive in the flowers of your garden.

You may feel my joy in the sweet tune of a bird’s song,

My laugh sounds in a maid’s anklet,

The inspiration of my mind greets you through the sweet scent of wind.

My soul talks in the fearless flow of spring,

Which comes from the prison of snow across the hill.

My brightness places on your ways where dew drops lie,

My exquisite beauty of mind mingles with evergreen field and the blue of sky.

I hug your bodies of mud wearing the blanket of deep fog

While the sweet light of dawn kisses the earth.

Then you may find the passion of my heart.

See the tree stands far behind

Where the flowers bloom by the shed of my blood.

The vast sky above and the grass on ground reveal my loneliness in the evening,

And the lotus in the pond opens its petals for my solitude presence here.

You may feel the madness of my mind

While a cowboy plays flute sitting under a tree.

In a stormy day,

You may hear the tragic song of my absent heart.

By my invisible drive in the mustard field,

I mingle with yellow color.

I go to the home of clouds

Walking on the muddy path.

The sound of my heart rings through the oars of boatmen,

Do you hear my steps in the assembly of you?

The garland

Which you make with the sacrificed flowers,

I exist there.

I whisper the talk of great unity in the flash of a new bride’s eyes,

The song of youth comes from my inner world.

Look at the horizon,

You may see my poem drawn in the line.

Beauty in beauty,

Words among words,

The beauty of my mind startles from there.

My all poems and songs may remove your woe,

All love and equity of man mingle with my thoughts,

My soul may be quiet with the touch of your magnificent love.

Hear the sound,

That the bell rings in the core of my heart.

My heart talks with all of you in the day, at night.

The sound of my soul utters in your minds

Taking away all curtains of mystery.

Search in your own hearts,

My soul lies there.

I exist in the prayer of each soul,

I exist in the silence and crowd of human.


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Jill Langhus
Sep 21
Sep 21

Hello Husna, Love,

How are you and your family doing, dear? Thanks so much for sharing your vibrant poem:-)

I hope you're all well and that you have a great week!


Sep 22
Sep 22

Hi dear beautiful Jill,
Thank your for your inspiration.We are fine.Hope that you are doing well.
Take care, Love & best wishes !

Jill Langhus
Sep 23
Sep 23

Hello Lovely:-)

You're very welcome!

Good to hear. Yes, I'm doing well, thanks.

You, too, Love! Miss you!


Sep 21
Sep 21

Hello Husna,
Thank you for your beautiful poem. I hope you are doing well.
I am intrigued by the last line. It seems to say we as women only exist in the shadow of men?
I would be glad to know what message that last line is trying to convey.
Wish you a nice day.

Sep 22
Sep 22

Thank you for your analytical response Arrey. Here man indicates the people or human beings.The last line indicates that I feel my existence where there is silence and also among gathering/crowd of people where I never forget my existence that who I am because my soul is always alive.I think it would be better to use the word human instead of man in the last line.Thank you so much.Love & blessings !

Nini Mappo
Sep 22
Sep 22

Hello Husna,
Thank you for sharing your intricate poem, still beautiful and power packed even after two decades!

Sep 22
Sep 22

Thank you dear Nini. I wrote this one from my inner feelings at my younger age.
Love & blessings to you !

Hello, Dear Husna,

How are you dear? I missed you! Thank you for sharing with us another well-written masterpiece of yours! You're written a lot of poetry already. Have you compiled them all into a book?

Please stay safe always, dear. Just in case you didn't notice. I deactivated my FB account.

Sep 26
Sep 26

Thank you dear Karen for your loving message.I missed you too.I noticed and felt sorrow that you deactivated.You must be always present among us to spread messages of love & inspiration.I haven't compiled my poems yet.Thanks again for your inspiration.Stay blessed sister, love & best wishes !