Feel it if you can

QuratulAin Minhas
Posted August 16, 2019 from Pakistan

The soil around my soul

Take me as a whole

The heart is full of pain

Your no attack is in vain

While killing my race

Put yourself in my place

When you shoot bullets

No gun asks you first

How many have you sent

They were too innocent

Your such expensive bread

Make us no more breath

#Kashmir

Quratulain Minhas

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Hello, Quratulain,

Thank you for adding your voice on the state of Kashmir. You poem pierces the heart. No one want to be in that situation.

Thank you for sharing!

QuratulAin Minhas
Aug 17
Aug 17

Thanks for this appreciation. I just need you people to help Kashmir to make a better place to live on

Jill Langhus
Aug 16
Aug 16

Oh, wow! Thanks for sharing your poignant poem, QuratulAin!

QuratulAin Minhas
Aug 17
Aug 17

Thanks But please make it useful.
Please help Kashmir..

Jill Langhus
Aug 19
Aug 19

You're welcome, but I'm not sure what we can do other than provide a space for connecting, supporting and sharing. Perhaps you have some ideas on how we can support you further or that other members may have some suggestions, too. I do hope the situation rectifies itself sooner rather than later. I empathize with the situation and your pain:-(

XX

Charity Birla
Aug 18
Aug 18

A literary way of expressing the innermost. One day it will end. You are so creative.
%#all lives matter.

QuratulAin Minhas
Aug 19
Aug 19

everything will be end. but how worst it if the hope would end too.

Charity Birla
Aug 19
Aug 19

Hope is what keeps every one moving. it gives us courage to see a better tomorrow even without a sign. I'm from a war inflicted area but I'm relying on hope.