Free in love

Rakhshinda Shakir
Posted December 11, 2019 from Pakistan

Until now I was


only caged in love!

Abandon me,

let me fly

Dear beloved..

I want to be free in love

The wind is here

In the foggy breeze

To block my distraction

And take me home,

Breaking all the chains of Imprisonment!

Perhaps in freedom,

We shall meet again

In the pure memory Of love,

To find salvation..

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Tarke Edith
Dec 11, 2019
Dec 11, 2019

Hello sister
you are welcome to world pulse.

Karen Quiñones-Axalan
Dec 11, 2019
Dec 11, 2019

Hello, Rakhshinda,

Wow, you're really good at writing poetry. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Dec 12, 2019
Dec 12, 2019

Hi Rakshinda,
Please how are you? I hope you are doing very well? It a very great poem on love.

Sometimes if we are not careful love cage us blindly. And you brought this out beautifully.
Thanks for sharing and hope you have a great week ahead.

Jill Langhus
Dec 13, 2019
Dec 13, 2019

Hello Dear Rakhshi,

How are you doing today? Thanks for sharing your lovely, thoughtful poem. I think love shouldn't be or feel like a prison, either.

Hope you're doing well and having a great Friday!