Endlessly, Silently

Rakhshinda Shakir
Posted December 16, 2019

Let's go to our tent

Atop the mountain

And gaze the sky

Endlessly, silently


Lets allow silence

To converse and reveal

Of our concealed emotions,

intimate longings!


Hey! What if

But, suddenly a star breaks,

You look into my eyes

And I make a wish!

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Karen Quiñones-Axalan
Dec 16, 2019
Dec 16, 2019

Hello, dear Rakhshinda,

Wow, another lovely poem from you. I wonder who is the "you" in this story. I'm curious, too, what would be that wish you're going to ask. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Dec 17, 2019
Dec 17, 2019

simple poem yet very revealing. cheers

Anita Shrestha
Dec 17, 2019
Dec 17, 2019

Thank you for sharing

Qurratulayn Khan
Dec 17, 2019
Dec 17, 2019

hi dear,
"let allow silence
to compete with hollowness"
beautiful peace of writing
best wishes

Jill Langhus
Dec 18, 2019
Dec 18, 2019

Aw... how sweet:-) How are you doing, Rakhshi?

Hope you're doing fab and having a great day and week:-)

Dec 19, 2019
Dec 19, 2019

Hi Rakhshinda,

Yah who is the You?

Can I ask? What is that wish? The what if... suddenly star breaks aha moment....