Umbrella

Robert Alan Apt
Posted October 22, 2017 from Philippines

Vraxia was born without her parents. They left her with her grandmother who took care of her while she was growing. The only memory her parents left was the black umbrella that was said that it would protect anyone who carries it by their side. This was the custom of the family for generations because they were known for wielding the umbrella as their protection or weapon. For generations countless blood drip from their merciless umbrella. They were known for their skilled and merciless combat skills. Every predator that comes before them is their most enjoyed and favorite prey. But now that Vraxia was left alone with her only family, her grandmother. How would she grow as a fine and strong woman.

Let me know about your comments and if you want me to continue this kind of story :) correct my grammar thanks :)

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Obisakin Busayo
Oct 26, 2017
Oct 26, 2017

Dear Robert

I want to warmly welcome you to the midst of thriving women in more than 190 countries of the world. I hope Vraxia grand parent would be able to take care of her and she would grow up a fine and strong woman. Thank you for your interest and concerns about the girl

Love

Busayo

maeann
Oct 26, 2017
Oct 26, 2017

Hi Robert.

Welcome to World Pulse.  With your story whom you like to reach out? What is your inspiration when you write a story?  And how you like to be a person of impact to the one reading it?  I hope this helps as you pursue in writing.

Nnenna Hannah okoh-Metu
Mar 16, 2018
Mar 16, 2018

Thank you for reaching out