Inside me

Sarak
Posted March 21, 2021 from Pakistan
Inside me
Everybody have feeling it might be sad happy excited or annoyed

You can’t feel me

You can’t see what I mean

bruh ok leave it

it’s all it what i 24/7 deal ☠️

 

I understand everyone say

talking to me is kinnda shame

because I jump and do silly stuff all day

everyone complain it is so lame

why they can’t see inside me

instead of shitting assumptions about me

 

cant they see peace’s breaking of my heart

and in place of that it is all dark ⬛️

 

God why is that so ‍♀️

that people who spit that

are also one of the snakes tho

 

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Tamarack Verrall
Mar 21
Mar 21

Dear Sarak,
Welcome, poet, dancer who jumps and does silly stuff. It can be hard to find your community when many don't understand stretching the narrow boundaries we are given to "be proper". You have found a community that embraces us all. Have a great time exploring, I look forward to more of your writing, too. I celebrate that you have found us at the age of 15, and loved reading your bio.

Sarak
Apr 27
Apr 27

Thanks maam .. it really means alot to me that a wonderful and inspiring person has commented on my first post ... keep supporting me in future too .. best. regards

Beth Lacey
Mar 23
Mar 23

I think you will find World Pulse a very supportive and accepting place for you.

Sarak
Apr 27
Apr 27

Thank u miss Beth..I am exploring it more and more and finding the new ways day by day

Dear Sarak,

Congratulations on your first post on World Pulse.

A lively and expressive poem.

I hope you will find the right support and motivation from the sisterhood.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the near future.

Take care and stay blessed!
Peace and blessings
Sabeena

Sarak
Apr 27
Apr 27

Thank u ... for guiding me for sister hood now I will explore more and more ... take care...best regards

Nini Mappo
Mar 27
Mar 27

Welcome to the sisterhood Sarak. Your expressive poem is beautiful, like an invitation to look inside you in hope of understanding you, connecting with you, but also a warning to keep off and not jump to conclusions.
Indeed we are constantly making assumptions about people we don't know and they about us, which unfortunately means we fail to 'meet' and connect with each other.
Keep your head up dear, and guard your beautiful from hurtful jabs of those who don't take the time to know you. And absorb as much light as you can because if you do, no darkness can ever overpower the light.
sending you mega sparkles to brighten up the dark :)
Nini

Sarak
Apr 27
Apr 27

Thank u mam for the wonderful comments.. and giving me the constructive feedback on my poem I am hoping to learn more from u and from my other fellows, thanks again