Roseah

Wala Lut
Posted May 25, 2019 from Yemen

This is my poem I want ur opinion.

 

Roseah it was her name. At the beach she always walks and plays with our yellow dog. At sunset she always sings her beatiful song that all birds dance with her. Roseah was my little pretty sister that all our city know her with bright blue eyes. She  brought too much fun and joy to our life. Roseah was lost in terrible death at train station by horrible crimical that has no heart. You were everything to me. Roseah I still keep love and pray for peace for you till the end of my time. You are my dearest baby always in

my heart.  

 

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Lisbeth
May 25
May 25

She is a very pretty girl. I can see her blue eyes vividly beautifully. Its a nice poem I agreed with. Just that I was looking forward to read more. It was lovely to picture the imagery part of it. The beach, the dog etc
Thanks for sharing.

Wala Lut
May 26
May 26

Hi sis.Salifu,

Thank u very much for sweat words.
Actually ,it is just my imagination.
To make it as short story and also as a poem.
U encourage me alot.

Lisbeth
May 26
May 26

You are most welcome. Am glad u got encourage :-)
Cheers

Wala Lut
May 26
May 26

U are just lovely.

Lisbeth
May 26
May 26

Thanks ;-)

Jill Langhus
May 26
May 26

Wow, Wala! That's really a sad, but also captivating poem.

Thanks for sharing:-)

Hope you're having a good, safe weekend!

Wala Lut
May 26
May 26

Hi Jill,
Thanks alot for ur kind words.
U,too.

Jill Langhus
May 27
May 27

Hello dear,

You're welcome. Hope you are safe and well:-)

Beth Lacey
May 31
May 31

This is heart-breaking and touching. I know you miss her very much

Wala Lut
Jun 01
Jun 01

Hi Beth,
Thanks alot .