beautiful but broken .

jeonseol wonderland
Posted March 13, 2018 from Morocco

​​​​​Her thoughts were high enough to reach the wild open sky , she was her own self ,so special that No one can really understand her , she was an ocean ,so deep that No one can know what she hides inside ,Her shadow seems to be dancing with every single tune life plays ,she was that one star that always shines , even all alone when all other stars hide, like she’s saying that she’ll always stay shining next to the moon, her soul was so pure to the point that makes you want to protect her from that cruel world , but , even a beautiful white rose has a black shadow , her scars were so deep to cut her into pieces ,she was stuck in an eternal fight with her own self , so calm outside ,right, yet so hurt inside ,she was all alone facing her fears ,she had always wished that someone will take her hand and tell her that everything’s gonna be alright , still wishing…when she was younger she used to be a little stargazer ,she really dreamed one day of being a star ,is it weird ? no  , she really become a star , but a broken one  , what a terrible world we live in , all the beautiful things you think of , don’t really existe , that awesome image of life that we all had when we were children is just an illusion ,a big lie our parents told us to protect us

 

it's a piece of my writing , hope u like it , i wrote it when i had a bad time . 

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jlanghus
Mar 14, 2018
Mar 14, 2018

Hi Chaima. Thanks for sharing your beautifully written poem. I can really feel what you were feeling. I hope you don't feel alone still, though. We always have our spirit guides and guardian angels...always:-) They are here to help you. Reach out to them, whenever you need guidance, support, love.

jeonseol wonderland
Mar 14, 2018
Mar 14, 2018

Thank you that's so sweet from u . much love

jlanghus
Mar 14, 2018
Mar 14, 2018

You're welcome:) I hope it helps you. It has helped me to not feel alone. Hope you are having a great day!

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Clodine Mbuli Shei
Mar 15, 2018
Mar 15, 2018

Hi Chaima,
Thank you for pouring your emotions. There are times like that but we need to build positive energy for greater days. Things always get better when we share with fellow sisters.

Olutosin
Mar 17, 2018
Mar 17, 2018

So deep.

Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

laison sylvie
Jan 25
Jan 25

A distant huge from this end sister. I have been there so I know how it feels. Joy comes in the morning.

Bettina Amendi
Jan 26
Jan 26

You can do more amidst all we face.2019 has great opportunities,waiting for another of this kind.
Regards
Bettina