How it feels to be me?

Rakhshinda Shakir
Posted January 24, 2018 from Pakistan

Like that of a music

soul soothing

She was lyrics

of a song

melodiously sung!

As a lonely traveller

coexisting yet in solitude,

She was like

a fresh breath

in the contaminated

world of bigotry.

Like a desire

silently melting

in the dreadful nightmare

of cold feelings

she made nexus of love

value warmth here and after.

Nothing much but merely

she was like a dream

coming true!!

so tell me how does

it feel to be like me!!!

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jlanghus
Jan 24, 2018
Jan 24, 2018

Good one, Rakshi:) Poignant and beautifully written. I like your new photo, too!

Tamarack Verrall
Jan 24, 2018
Jan 24, 2018

It is the poets the bring such beauty to creating change, and here you lead beautifully with melody and love. 

Sister Zeph
Jan 24, 2018
Jan 24, 2018

Beautiful , I love the way you describe it so amazing 

Olutosin
Jan 24, 2018
Jan 24, 2018

This is lovely.

it feels great to be me.

Thanks so much for writing this beautiful lines.

Rakhshinda Shakir
Feb 11, 2018
Feb 11, 2018

Thank you so much dear ones for admiring and actually giving time to read and listen. I am forever grateful to you all. <3